Re: [ubl-lcsc] Placement of disclaimer... revised intro

Looks good to me.

If someone will give me a call on the mobile below when the finals are on-line and the downloadable is done, I would be happy to run through it again.

marion

 

 

Marion A. Royal
202.208.4643 (Office)
202.302.4634 (Mobile)

 
"Jon Bosak" <>
01/26/2003 11:43 AM PST
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 Subject: [ubl-lcsc] Placement of disclaimer... revised intro
 

Hi Lisa,

I said in our phone conversation today that I would find a good
place for the copyright/disclaimer in the release document.

I think it should go right at the end of the Intro and just before
"1. Scope."  But I also think we should add a paragraph soliciting
public comment.  I'm not sure whether this was discussed and
rejected or whether we just didn't consider it.  In any event, to
save time I've created a drop-in replacement for the Intro section
(see below) that

 - incorporates the disclaimer

 - incorporates a new subsection labeled "Public Comment"

 - incorporates a few nit-level fixes (I'm sorry, I can't help
   myself)

If these changes are OK, then you can just drop the html in the
attachment into your file to replace the current intro.  I invite
anyone who's still interested in this level of diddling to unzip
the attachment and check it out.

Jon

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