I had started making a few changes also. Perhaps the best thing for me to do is start over with this version.
Everything I spotted was editorial except for one thing, which was a statement that we were managing activities. I have seen this also in Microsoft material. The difficulty is that we are calling activity an abstract notion for which we are managing context. I do not think we create or manage the activity itself, do we?
I'll get the rest input as soon as I can.
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From: Mark Little [mailto:]
Sent: Monday, June 14, 2004 7:27 AM
To: Greg Pavlik; ws-caf-editors
Subject: Re: [ws-caf-editors] Latest (final?) WS-Context
Comments in line. I accepted all of the changes and then made some more.
Mark.
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Subject: [ws-caf-editors] Latest (final?) WS-Context